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      Bye, babe." Alfred wrapped his muscular arms around my waist and gave me a peck on my nose.

       "Why?" I pouted and gazed into his ocean blue eyes. "I want you to stay for a bit longer~"

       Alfred chuckled, "That's what you said a half hour ago!" as he rest his forehead on mine.

       "Hmph!" I said as wrapped my arms around his neck and gave him a peck on the lips.

       "Okay..." I sighed. Alfred chuckled and pecked me back, placing his hands on my hips lifting me up before setting me down to my feet. He continued to walk backwards from the couch to the front door. "You're coming back tomorrow, right?"

       "You know it babe~!" Alfred gleamed.

       "Good!" I giggled as Alfred leaned forward and locked his lips into mine in a passionate kiss. Alfred's arms embraced me strongly around my waist as I tangled my fingers into his dirty blonde hair without unlocking our passionate kiss. Breaking for air, Alfred and I sighed knowing that he had to go home.

       "See you tomorrow, babe~" Alfred said as he put me down.

       I smiled faintly, "Yeah…."

       He opened the door and stepped out.

       "I love you!" I smiled.

       "I love you too," Alfred smiled.

       I sighed as he left. I closed my eyes and laid down on the carpet.

       *Thump Thump Thump*

       I placed my hand over my pounding heart. I smiled gently feeling Alfred's lips on mine, his arms around my waist, my hands in his hair. I sighed happily as I replayed our kiss before squealing with excitement as I wondered what would tomorrow be like.
heh. I'm not sure if i'm can do the 100 theme challenge out of order but i just finished this first and i was very excited~! :iconlawooplz: This proably sucks very badly. But i would like some advise how to make this better, so i can become a better writer. ^-^ and CATS~! P.S. sorry it's short. I was hoping to make it short but sweet. Hope i did okay~ Also i would like to say thank to ~BringLemonTheHorizon for editing it for me. THANK YOU SO MUCH~!!!! :iconlawooplz: :iconglomp2plz:
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Just grammar stuffs... I could help you proofread before you make a deviation if you like!